Pangarap na Pag-ibig sa AB 4FL

January 6th, 2009 by davismarcruiz

   

a munting opisina sa AB 4th floor,
Siya ay madalas nananahan.
Mga folders ang laging tahan-tahan
‘Di ko alam bakit kaysarap nyang pagmasdan.

Kay tamis ng kanyang mga ngiti,
Waring matitikman ang langit.
Pangarap kong ito’y mahagkan
At nangangarap na di na bibitawan.

Ang kanyang mga mata’y laging nangungusap,
Waring pag-ibig ang ipinapahayag.
Pangarap kong ako’y kanyang matitigan
Upang ito’y aking maramdaman.

Bawat salitang kanyang binibigkas,
Waring musika sa aking pandinig.
Pangarap kong lagi sya marinig
Dahil katumbas nito’y isang milyong awit.

Hanggang kailan ako maghihintay?
O siya ba’y akin nang lalapitan?
At ipahayag ang tunay na nararamdaman
Ang pangarap na pag-ibig sa AB 4th floor.

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January 6th, 2009 by davismarcruiz I was born to write as I always believed but after reading my finished articles they just ended as rubbishes. I tried writing short stories and poems but I thought they were cheesy so I never shared it to others, who's gonna be interested to them if I, the writer, did not like them anyway? But I always wish someone may be interested, because what makes a writer happy is he's aware that his writings are being read.

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19 comments to “Pangarap na Pag-ibig sa AB 4FL”

1. wayne angelo Says:
   January 14th, 2009 at 9:29 am

   nice.. :-)

2. 
   davismarcruiz Says:
   January 20th, 2009 at 12:30 pm

   thanks for appreciating this one…

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3. butchoy Says:
   January 23rd, 2009 at 10:34 pm

   yup really nice…

4. 
   davismarcruiz Says:
   February 4th, 2009 at 3:09 pm

   thank you! thank you!

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5. big C for u Says:
   February 10th, 2009 at 10:53 am

   wow,

   love is in the air..;)

   i can really feel that the speaker of this poem is truly inlove.

   sana ung nsa AB 4th floor n un ay mapansin k nman khit minsan lng..

   officer b xa ng IAS council? ahmm, who’s this luCky officer?!!!

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   davismarcruiz Says:
   February 10th, 2009 at 1:18 pm

   the luCCky officer.??? ahmmmnnn,,secret..ahahahahaha,,,basta,,but i really appreciate you reading this simple poem…

   OO in love ako heheheh,,di nga ako makaget-over ’cause I wasn’t able to confess my true feelings to this officer,,kasi feeling ko sobrang magkaiba ang mundo namin…Natatakot din akong mareject.

   Do you think tama lang na silent ako? Hope to hear from you soon.!

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7. big C for u Says:
   February 10th, 2009 at 1:50 pm

   may question po aq.. bkt po double C ung spelling nio ng lucky? Is this a clue kung cno ung IAS officer? sori, curious lng..

   super clincher nman ng tanong m, i dont know wat to answer.. im also afraid of rejection, pro what i think is mas mganda if u tried to tell him n u have feelings for him-maraming ways to tell him, pwedeng thru frends kung nhihiya k (at least mas gagaan n ung loob m, cguro ngaun di n gnyang kabigat yan). kung sakali nmang he rejected u, msakit sa umpisa pro cguro ngaun mas okay k n- u’ve freed urself from him (khit 80% lng, it’s a big help already)..

   this is just an advice lng nman, naniniwala lng kc aq n the more u repressed something, the more it strikes u.. gets?

8. 
   davismarcruiz Says:
   February 11th, 2009 at 8:41 am

   Why ‘Him?’ hehehheeh natawa ako.

   typographical error lang un kaya double c hehehehe…

   Yeah, IAS officer sya,,,ayan me clue kana.!

   Just to let you know I really appreciate your advice and answer to my question. You enlightened me.

   I’ll take note what you said “the more u repressed something, the more it strikes u.”

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9. 
   davismarcruiz Says:
   February 11th, 2009 at 8:42 am

   ‘Him’…binubuko mo’ko hehehhehe…

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10. sugar_n_spice Says:
    February 11th, 2009 at 1:09 pm

    …davis, i didn’t know that u have the talent to put words into writing..friend ang deep ha….i am proud of you!….enjoy the feeling of being inspired..inspired nga lng ba?!..hmp!….miss yah!..be back to work later…hay! lol

11. big C for u Says:
    February 11th, 2009 at 1:27 pm

    

    Ay sori po..

    wish q lng n sana mlaman nya n may isang tao n nkagawa ng tula because of HIM, sana mabasa nya to..

    gud luck po!!

12. hecticschedule Says:
    February 11th, 2009 at 8:42 pm

    hi there, i just read your poem and i like it…even the comments here are interactive..just an advise…if you can’t say it personally there are other ways to say it aside from composing poems…how about a song?..lol

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    davismarcruiz Says:
    February 11th, 2009 at 8:52 pm

    To Sugar and Spice,,ahahaha,,thanks for spending time reading this one…

    Simple nga lang to walang kalalim-lalim hehehehe…

    Just ot let you know, I’m not inspired but in love..ehehhe cheeeessyyyy

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14. 
    davismarcruiz Says:
    February 11th, 2009 at 8:55 pm

    To big C for you… hi hi..thanks for responding again..nakakahiya naging forum na eto ehhehehe..Wala un…You don’t need to say sorry.
    Yeah I hope and pray for the same thing..SAna mabasa nya eto.

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15. aproudtam Says:
    February 13th, 2009 at 10:36 pm

    I read this na before. I guess you let me read it while in class. Haha. Want me to reveal his identity? He maybe lurking here.

16. 
    youngchi Says:
    February 17th, 2009 at 3:45 pm

    napakahusay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    simple pero maganda ang nilalaman…

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17. 
    youngchi Says:
    February 17th, 2009 at 3:46 pm

    wag ka kasing torpe… go for the goal!!

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18. kids@work Says:
    February 17th, 2009 at 6:42 pm

    nice one!!!

19. harrypotter Says:
    February 17th, 2009 at 7:13 pm

    this is an original poem right? more! more!

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